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I know its late,but I was out till late on Valentines day and didn't have time to submit it. I made this for my girlfriend. She likes it and I hope you will too. Comments as always are appreciated.Zip includes 1280 and 1024.
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Unh.. I guess it's nice and rosy and really good with what you've intended it for but I can't help thinking that it's also awfully corny. Showing your love with flowers and smiling girls and..pinkish purple.

The whole "I love you I adore I give my whole soul for you be my valentine and my love and my housewife for the rest of eternity" just doesn't sink into me. Though that's a really pretty girl. I do like the like the little heart-detail, and I think you should have added more details to it on the whole. And it kind of bothers me that the flower bouquet is positioned so near to the corner, and a part of the lines are just cut out mercilessly, while the rest of the piece holds strictly inside the area. It would help if there were more things going in and out of the borders.

It's just too sweet and romantic for me :P (Razz)

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